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If you you want me to choose one poem so i will chose black 'Sand Beaches'.there are more are i love like - love letters, set back and love me secretly.

''If ballet were the number of style,you would be a dancer''

nice lyric poems..

There were some real nice ones, like 'Set Back' and 'Black Sand Beaches', but soemtimes in the poems the lines are too long, throwing the rhythm off. The last poem, 'To be continued..' had a unique idea, and nicely done, though I thought it was the end at the line 'This is not quick expression; to say I love you all of the time' and thought that was a goood way to end, but the poem continues on the next page. I felt this took away from the impact of the previous statement.
I really like the strength in the words of 'Black Sand Beaches', and the message in 'Set Back' was great, and the rhymes mostly fitted well to the rhythm.
Please have a look at my poems, also in the contest. I would appreciate your thoughts :)

I did find the later poems easier to read because of the way they were laid out; but I like the simplicity of your writing and its obvious sincerity. I liked Paper Cutt and especially Mama Strong.

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poetry writing contest "Winter & Poems".

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I enjoyed reading your book and gave it my vote.

Salvatore

I truly enjoyed your poetry. It's plain simple and easy to understand way you put things remind me of the way I write. My favs are'Mama Strong and 'Paper cutt' along with a lot of others. You deserve a star!
Please read "WHITE DOWN" and "DEER ELK: LETTER". You will see the similarity in the type of words used./joeparente

That was my favorite! Reminded me of Maya Angelo's "Still I Rise".

Thank you for sharing,

God Bless,

Tyrone

Sincere and deep feelings of someone in love head over heels. Love gives wings for people to become poets...Keep up the good work and let your heart beat forever...Voted.