BookRix

It's a short story, but a good one.

I would like to see more of your work.

as a short story i could have never been more absorbed by it! i could see everything and i do reccomend that you make a full 15-20 chapter book, i would enjoy reading it. and if you are not already a book writer then i think that you would make books that the moment they hit the shelves they would be gone in to the hearts and minds of the thousand readers who would enjoy your books. you have set a story line now work off it. this is how all great writers come to be.

many blessings of luck,
calkhi

i try to make a point in each of these books

thank you paige and you too r&j your comments make writting worthwhile that's also for the star. beltar

i have read this book and thought it was good

i have read this book and thought it was good

i have read this book and thought it was good

joe, coming from you that means alot thanks

This is a really good story that was well written and exciting. It kept my interest and fun to read. My vote and star are well deserved./joeparente

Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Family Stories".

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