Ayame,
I really like this comprehensive collection of poetry that you have written. My favorites are "Your Own Problem" - This poem flows so smoothly. It is straight forward, touching and in rhythmic motion. [And your only excuse is hardly legit. Tell me the whole story, what did you omit? You can't back out, you promised to commit.]
"A Scrap of Paper", "From My Point of View", "Name Acrostic", Love, Make Sense, and "Humor".... Show more
Ayame,
I really like this comprehensive collection of poetry that you have written. My favorites are "Your Own Problem" - This poem flows so smoothly. It is straight forward, touching and in rhythmic motion. [And your only excuse is hardly legit. Tell me the whole story, what did you omit? You can't back out, you promised to commit.]
"A Scrap of Paper", "From My Point of View", "Name Acrostic", Love, Make Sense, and "Humor". These are pieces to be treasured.
Exceptional work!
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