WAILING HEART

a book of love,pain and hope By:
avilash09
User: avilash09
WAILING HEART
WAILING HEART-as the name suggests its a book of 3 drabbles .each having a cry. two have a emotional breakdown and the third one has a moral of never lose hope.

  • Fiction
  • 306 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 494
  • 4
  • Publication Date: 09-04-2010
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iliketoread9
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iliketoread9

It doesn't have much of a plot, and it doesn't grab your attention. IO think you need to work on those two aspects.

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joeparente
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joeparente

Well done but some work is needed for flow.
Great presentation. Perhaps titles instead of chaptering would help the flow that these need./joeparente

himaVemula
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himaVemula

U hav a passionate heart.The saying words express more than saying is true,wen i read ur buk.

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