Nicely written but u add some boost in it, if u wish
yes I am planning on it I actually started writing this book when I was only twelve still had a lot to learn I still have a lot to learn now to but I am better. but anyways you can definitely plan on some way better boost, wording, details, words, and foreshadowing
Best of Luck
thanks
i was read this story second time
because i like it to much
haha otay haha
Sweet
So far, it is amazing. You write very well my friend :)
AMAZING STORY
thank you so much! I will be updating soon
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I love this book too!!!!!!! Please tell me your gonna update soon.... I'm hooked!
~Silvereyes
yay!! my very first review! thank you!
You're welcome :)
~silvereyes~