This was such a sweet little story...I love cats! I have five of them and one is about to drop a litter pretty soon and I'm so excited to see what they'll look like because I get so enthralled over their furry splendor... :) Wishing you many blessings and keep studying..
Over all this was a very cute story to read, I'm an animal lover so I can relate to playing with a pet when I was supposed to be doing something else. And the cover is adorable, kittens are honestly the best pet ever :)
Some corrections: in the first paragraph did you mean that you were supposed to be studying, not currently studying?
page 5- "as evening wears on"..."I can't help but chuckle" and you can use kitten instead of... Show more
Cute story! Kitties are so fuzzy and entertaining. :)
I've a kitty that is easily allured by my fingers when I move them.
Thank you Adam :)
Well, I don't like pets at all since my parrots died when I was in five. I can't understand why I wrote this :D
Very nice short story. I detected 3 typos but they don't affect your overall work.
Congrats on your first story. Keep up the good work!
You can message me my mistakes. I'll make it in the book :)
Thank you for liking the story :)
And it was not my first work, if you want you can check up my other books.
Ups! My bad! :)
I'll send you a pm with the typos by this weekend, I hope. My spare time is a bit limited at the moment.
okay :)
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