Wow it's sad but interesting. I can't wait to read more
I was truly touched by your story! Love is so beautiful and what's amazing, we get to take that Love with us until death do we part. Leaving us with the Reflections of all those wonderful memories shared. It was an Awesome indite and thanks for sharing it! :)
Sorry I didn't saw this comment before. Yes love is what teaches everything. hope you are waiting for more. I'll update soon :)
Your work is extremely beautiful. You wrote a lovely story, selection of words is amazin'. Keep it up :)
Thank you ^^
It's beautiful. .your writing is almost poetic. There are some gaps in the story but that is what makes it beautiful. Specially because you wrote it for your Father, which is just heart touching. You have great talent and be sure when I tell you you'll go very far in life. Please continue writing, you are really good at it.
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thank you! It felt great to read such an appreciation :) it is dedicated to father because he is the best man and Sir Bashir Raza was my teacher, he was just like my father too ^^
It's just the truth. :) I'm sure they were great men. :)
Thank you again. they sure were. :')
So sad. I enjoyed this and I agree with Sabhow, it needs some revision but I can see a lovely story enfolding her. Let me know when you have more.
Thank you. I'll of coarse revise it. Hope this book turns out as I expect in the end. :)
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This is really good. It's so sad, and it made me see what was happening. It seemed to end abruptly though, and I'm not sure if you intended it to or not. With some revisions, this could be a great story.
Thank you :)
I've a great story in my mind. I thought to have some reviews, I'll make some changes when it will reach some stage.
Make sure you update me when you do! :)
sure :)
Aww, how sad! Can't wait to read more!
You have a few grammatical errors scattered about the book, but it really isn't that big of a deal. A simple skim-through should fix that.
Thank you :) I'll be updating soon.
I'll edit it in the end.
The story will make your heart beat even more faster :)
I hope so.