I'm sorry. I can't read this.
The book needs editing to indicate paragraphs as well as the use of appropriate punctuation to indicate speech. I can tell this is a good book but I honestly cannot read and enjoy it. Please edit it to make it more readable.
:)
Warm regards,
J. M. Rivers
-fangirls- oml i love this so much like SO SO SO SO SO SO much. and i love how you expressed the feelng through out the book like when she cried i felt hearttache or while shes running from the man. its like im right there uk. while she ran my heart beating fast running with her. i love writers like that haha so i like you XD but still i really like this. UPDATE SOON
Reckless <3
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