Nicely written! One or two teensy-weensy boo-boos, but nothing the quick flick of a well-crafted wand can't fix, lol. Your imagination is in perfect synch with the spirit of the series. Great job!
Thanks a lot, really!!
I'd be happy if you could pin-point the errors, but no pressure intended. Your comment meant a lot to me by the way. Filled me with the urge to write the next chapter!
I love your flow...I really connected with your characters and enjoyed the ride. Be blessed, Danny...
Thanks a lot! Keep looking out for any update notification then!! :D
NICE writing style, Arianna. The structure hit me as very mature, and very tightly woven.
Thanks a lot!!