The Ninja

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The Ninja
It's the year 1850 and Mitsuki has to deal with being stolen by a ninja that falls for her and her with the same feelings his name is Takuto.

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epic book ^^ you should write more if you can

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lavonya

what happened between 3 & 4?
How did she blind him in one eye?
What happened to make her do that?
What happened in the year before?

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valkerie11

i realy think u should give each person more of a backround............no offense just trying to give advice....i am writeing a book o i found that mistake fast!!!!

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lolcatsrule

You jumped into the action too quickly. Slow it down, make the story flow just a little bit better. I'm not trying to be mean, just trying to help. I liked it though, I loved it, really, a lot, other than those two things.

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