This is pretty good; it's well-written and actually is pretty funny instead of a bunch of capitalized cursing. I haven't finished the whole thing yet, but I'm liking what I'm seeing. There are a few spelling mistakes (pg. 1, should be 'showed' instead of 'should'; pg. 1, should be 'you're' instead of 'your') but besides that I think it's pretty much legible. ;)
Good job, and keep writing :D
Thank you for your comment. I appreciate you talking the Time to read and comment and point out errors. Unfortunately I am too lazy to go back in edit, but one day on my day off I will.
- Andeline
I loved the update! Please let me know when you update again!
Really good so far! Keep up the good work! :) And let me know when you update again!
Great story! Cant wait till you update again! Can you please let me know when you do? :) Keep up the good writing!
wow is all i can say right now but plz write more
i SO hope that this story continues!! great book :)
I am, first I have to edit. It would be better to go to Wattpad that's where the new updates will be