Sydney, Abby, and Scarlett

With a Twist By:
Sydney, Abby, and Scarlett
This was written for the 100 word contest on bookrix hope you enjoy. Three differnt short stories each served with twist.

Keywords: 
Fiction, romance, ghost, hunting
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Deleted User

I enjoyed both Sydney and Scarlett. Both had a nice, twisted ending. Abbey looked rushed. You needed to put her father's words as dialogue.

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cwzvil92

My favorite one out of the three excerpts was the one about Sydney. While I was reading I was thinking oh no something bad is going to happen between her and this guy, but by the end I was thinking aww that's so sweet yet sad. I liked how for the excerpt on Sydney the story didn't feel rushed. However for the other two excerpts I felt like an important factor from each of their respective back stories were missing. To... Show more

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