love the word choice, it all creates very vivid imagry that sticks in your head good job!
If i decide eto kill someone i will refer to your poetry. i added it to my favorites too.
Thanks Patrick, Valerie and Miacaa. Appreciate your support :)
I find it incredibly difficult to believe you are only 23 years old. You write like one who has lived a long life...you must be an old soul indeed. I am incredibly impressed with everything you have written and hope that fame and fortune is yours, as you deserve it.