BookRix

These poems are touching and soothing. They make you think and appreciate life. I love the cover. Great job!

Angelica,
Your poetry is very touching. Very well written. You definitely show your feelings through your writing. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your work. :)

You seem to have a knack putting your emotions into words. Everyone has given you good advice. Keep putting your heart into words. That is where all good writing comes from. Robynn

Anjelica, the sentiments are there, that's for sure. You need to work a bit on the grammar and spelling. Also to place your commas in the right places.
Keep at it...it's worth it.
Laz

I'm not usually a poem girl, but dang! They're great, love em'. You have a few spelling mistakes and you might need more commas, to create pauses and help get the meaning across. But otherwise good job!

I like the stinging eyes very much. You should put it in the contest.

Edit it a little hear and there and you would have a very good entry. Way to go. I have a daughter only 1 year younger than you well maybe almost 2 years she will 14 this April the 4th. She likes to write poems and draw anime art.