That Emotion You Call Love

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That Emotion You Call Love
A series of poem about love through my eyes.

  • Poetry
  • 304 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 323
  • 3
  • Publication Date: 08-02-2011
Keywords: 
Love, Poem
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jim0865
Important Post
jim0865

Angel, sweetheart, when you put the words "be my hero" or be my "savior" in a poem; you're calling all perps in any given area. Change that.

On the content side, you are a natural songwriter. Natural.
Concise. Open hearted poetry that has strong emotion. And above all, the compulsion to write, which means--you'll be good at it if you keep it up.

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angel92296
angel92296

Love the honesty. I'm late, i know but i have grown as a writer. Thank you.

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