I hope you come back to finish this story, it's really good. I would love to know what happens next....
Amazing! I loved this so death! Lol continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yeah sorry about that i had took some time out to fix that and some things may be scattered right now but im working on it now.
thanks for the feedback
I liked the story and hope you will write more :)
Although the grammar and some of the spelling needs working on
Yeah i found that the other day i dont have thte heart to change it
This is really good! Is there more to the story or is this it? Are you going to continue writing? Please do! Thanks for the story!