Halloween Night

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Halloween Night
What have the girls seen. Is it all in their heads? Read to find out ...

Keywords: 
ghost, halloween
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robbedbygreed

Well, this was very unexpected. And though I'm not one to enjoy stories from the suspense or horror genres (Halloween, Dead People, Zombies, Ghosts, etc.), this one I actually enjoyed! You really made me like this genre, or at least changed my mind about it. Somewhat ;)

Great job!

However, I do have some critiques:

First off, you don't need to explain how a name sounds. The reader(s) will figure it out. Don't worry ;) Also, if... Show more

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angel.of.death

I can promise you this story isn't really scary because I wrote it when I was quite young.

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