Well, this was very unexpected. And though I'm not one to enjoy stories from the suspense or horror genres (Halloween, Dead People, Zombies, Ghosts, etc.), this one I actually enjoyed! You really made me like this genre, or at least changed my mind about it. Somewhat ;)
Great job!
However, I do have some critiques:
First off, you don't need to explain how a name sounds. The reader(s) will figure it out. Don't worry ;) Also, if... Show more
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I can promise you this story isn't really scary because I wrote it when I was quite young.