Out of Time

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Out of Time
A group of Scientists working on a top secret project accidentally open a time portal-specifically to Tombstone at the time of the infamous gun fight at the OK Coral.

  • Adventure
  • 6481 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 1153
  • 4
  • Publication Date: 03-11-2012
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It's a great book so far, really enjoyed the writer's voice and dialogue in this. It had me hooked since the first sentence. But I noticed you had a lot of dialogue tags (he said, she said, he giggled, etc.) which really threw me off and I simply started to skim around trying to avoid those pieces.

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