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Well, you're right about one thing: It was hot! And, at my age, I don't think I should be reading this kind of stuff. Excellent righting though.

Spicy! Let us know when you update it!

Hi there, Dghazaly! Thanks for reading, and please check in every now and then 'cause there's more to come soon.

With much appreciation,
Andrea

love it but too short .

Thanks for that catch, Ripples. A fresh pair of eyes are a writer's best friend.

...and I'll be sure to leave in the hardcore next time. Thanks so much for the read and feedback!

I read it and I have to say, I'm really looking forward to see....LOL...what happens next. You have done a good job with this, I'm with Yezall on the embellishments, lets see it girl. I know its there. Got it on lock so let me know when the next installment will be. also on the first page, you got again when she's hiding in the shadows, but I think you meant against.

"I prefer less embellishments when describing sex."

Mmm, can we talk? LOL, so do I. ;-) But, I'm not sure how far we can go on this site, so I figured to err on the side of flowery. *laughing*

Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it muchly!

I prefer less embellishments when describing sex. That's me, others my read it and say WOW! I think if you told a longer tale people would get a chance to know your characters and care about them. You have the gift you just have to hone your skills. You're doin great!