Davey

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Davey
"He soon enters the school, he knew the exact location of his final kill-the cafeteria. Those who hadn't caught wind of the attack where unaware of Davey's approach. He enter the cafeteria and with an eagle's eye spots Mark. Like an animal on the hunt, he wastes no time taking out his pray. Firing two shoots, a bullet lodged itself in Mark's neck. Blood shoots everywhere, covering the people in front of him with blood. Students scrabbled, taking shelter under tables."

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arkmeans

Wow, a side from the many grammatical errors I found this story to be pretty intense. The sad thing about it is things such as this take place often due to excessive bullying. Great story.

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