This was a template for my other book, I had the idea in my head, I just couldn't formulate it. But, my mum made me post this book. Most of the books I've posted on this site, under this user that is, are not to my liking. If you would really like to see some of my true writing, though it might be a little mature, please check out my other book. It's called Fated, it's under the user wolfiegirlie. My other account. Thank you... Show more
I did read the entire short story and the basic concept is not bad. The book needs a lot of work still on grammar and spelling errors. The conversation between the two alphas became confused several times.
I would say keep working on it because I think it's a good start.
it was a good story it could be alot longer though. but another than that i loved it :)
I will take your advice to heart Thanks so so so so much!
I absoulutly love your plot you just need to slow down a bit and add some desription but hey I shouldn't really say much XD
i know i am new and this short story probably isnt the greatest and that the plot is almost exactly the same as any other werewolf short story but plz read it and leave me a commetn on how i could improve my writing i would really appreciate it. thnx