Guardians of the Gate

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Guardians of the Gate
Quiet forests of Colorado. Michael Cole, ordinary soccer player and Senior fall sin love with Evelyn and is drawn into her heart and her mystical world...If Twilight and Lord of the Rings had a baby, this novel would be it.

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Hey Ami, there was some tense changes on the first page, but other than that it has great potential- keep it up!

mistercat
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mistercat

I read and write completely different types of books. Reading I like to be pulled into situations that make me feel the reality of what is happening.
Some suspense, some emotional situaton that speaks to something that requires choices, good or bad. My writing is for children similar in that I write to have them understand that there are soltions to the difficulties of life and there are situations that we must all face but rarely alone.

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mistercat

Have done several books now: The Adventures of Grum-m-p the Toad, Misee Mouse (in print), Ssssammy Snakes Jungle Adventures (for e-readers)and Is
Little Lion Sick? I want children to learn by reading something informative and fun to help them see we all struggle but can succeed.

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