I like this story. It is well-written and very age appropriate. A good cast of characters. The mystery was good and I liked the way you solved it. Like the code you came up with, especially if was changed to better fit in with the lives they really wanted to live.
I like the dynamics of the pack and the different relationships were interesting. I agree that the chapters could have been longer to fill in some unanswered questions. I like the twist with the introduction of what Jack really was.
It's a good story, with strong characters that needs some editing work, but a interesting Werewolf story that I enjoyed,
Thank you and thanks for letting me know what needs to be worked on as well I mean I already knew that from the other girl but it's still good to have other's inputs. Thank you again for taking the time to read it and if you want please feel free to check out the other two books... Show more
Sure, thing. When I have the time I'll give them a look see.
That's no problem :D I hope when you do read them that you enjoy them like this one
The story was a little too straight forward, nonetheless I found it interesting :) I liked the main plot of the story, not one that you may find in a werewolf genre very often because some others are a little different than yours. Maybe if you stretch the chapters a little more then you may be able to fit a little more detail in.
Thanks for the heads up :)
np :)
You're welcome to check out the other two books in the series if you want.... The 2nd one is called The Blood Moon
I'll be sure to check it out :)
Cool :)
Thank you
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