A Glitch In To A Guy's Mind

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User: ambermn
A Glitch In To A Guy's Mind
After a horrible hit and run accident, Eliza is put in a medically-induced coma. When she wakes, she expects to be in a hospital bed or even in Heaven. Instead, she finds herself in a boxed room with nothing but two large windows and a safa. Turns out she's in aquantaince Lucas Matthewso's head and he's not got the happy life she envisioned he had. Eliza wonders if she she helps him with his problems inside his mind, perhaps she will be strong enough to befriend him to his face?

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teen, fiction, romance, mystery
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hinazombie18

Please continue. Well written.

I am also writing a book. Please read.

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bugzbsmith

Creative plot!!!! Continue on, I think it needs to be wider, add more! It's a great story so far!

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elreader

its an interesting plot, i like it. you should write more. the only thing that bugs me is how much Eliza's friend Hannah cusses. if its not vital to the plot i don't think that its necessary.

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