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Well saying i was in 5th grade when i acually wrote this book.... i probably would of made it better if i wrote it in my teens but thanks for your critisism.
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I like it but it needs more capitalization and all that stuff. I didn't really understand it because there wasn't good punctuation. and it is a little confusing.
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i dont know what to say all i can say is that I LOVE IT
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Sorry i have some mistakes but its still great and make sure to see the rest in My Life as a Vampire Part Two!!!