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i really liked it but i didn`t get why u put on one page "gg"
gr8 story,look forward to the next,got me intreged good use of words to
i really enjoyed that story,whens the next one out? gr8 choice of words
You have got the start of a very good story! I really liked it. There are some spelling and sentence errors that can be caught by a read through. Good job!./joeparente
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