BookRix

Sort of reminds me of me and you hun. Now we know what we have to do, huh!

Thanks.

Its intriguing how u have captivated both pple individually n brought out wat most dont feel free to share while in a r/ship. Very captivatin. Gud job.

I appreciate the comment and thank you for the vote. Sometimes you just close your eyes and let your heart do the writing.

Thanks for taking the time to read the poems. As much as poetry is best left to the reader to interpret in a manner that reflects where they are at a particular point, I would like to think that with this piece it is not so much that she was never there or that he left but rather that 2 people in love just did not find a common way of expressing affection for each other and at the risk of losing one another choose to do so.

I like your style of presentation (From the Beginning, The Realization and The End). It is the voice of a reality in a relationship. You have my vote.

Two EXCELLENT poems. But forgive me...is she going to leap BACK to him?

I hope I will not seem like too much of a dork if I had no clue about Of Human Bondage. But I will make it a point to find it and acquaint myself with Philip.

The sadness of your poem reminds me of Philip Carey, the hero of OF HUMAN BONDAGE, which I am currently reading. One-sided love is so painful. You wrote it well.