Virgin

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User: *Starz*
Virgin
Ericka has no social life. No one wants to know her and she doesn’t give a shit about anyone else either. She is the only girl in her year that is still virgin, she is becoming desperate to change this but she doesn’t know the first thing about boys.

Till she meets Darren.

Keywords: 
Virgin, Boy, Girl, Love, Emo
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Deleted User

plz update soon..........!

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Deleted User

update plz...............

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Deleted User

PLZ update........................

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Deleted User

Plz update

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*Starz*

Will soon.

Deleted User

kk thnx

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Deleted User

It's really good, I like the idea! Anyway, please update! I want to read more! XD

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*Starz*

Okay tnx

*Starz*

btw ty for addin to ur favs

Deleted User

Your welcome!

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JustinSix

Let’s start with the positives. Your writing style itself isn’t bad, your bravery in using swear words within some of the dialogue is good, though you should be careful with it. You didn’t make a lot of common mistakes that new authors do, I wasn’t thrown off by your grammar or spelling, though I did notice errors. Note that I regularly get thrown off and am forced to stop reading as a result of grammar/spelling in other... Show more

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*Starz*

just finished reading this..xD

i'll try my best to fix it up and correct my mistakes but i think i'm kinda stuck..

JustinSix

What exactly are you stuck on? If you want tips for how to further characterize your characters, or how to more subtly add the romance in I can give some examples. Just name whatever you want tips/help with and I will do my best. I really want to push this site away from the... Show more

*Starz*

I'll private message you.

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