this is getting better and i'm glad you made the improvements i told you^_^
WELL DONE THIS BOOK IT SO COOL!^_^
How do you read more?!!! This book is awesome!
really good I think you are an amazing writer
nice start, i like what your going with, the storyline is good and everything but i think you have a few mistakes. but other than that GREAT WORK, can't wait for more.
update plz