thanx for being blunt and honest with me i appreciate what u all have said and i know now what i need to do to become a better writer so for awhile longer i'm sorry to say but u may have to wait for the rest becaus i will be concentrating on my school work so i can get into some college so if you have any request on my book or ideas please share them so i can take them into consideration while i am not writing online but instead at school.
it has potential but next time dont give away the plot in the summary especially if part of what is in the summary hasnt even happened yet.. it definitely lessens my enthusiasm to keep reading when you finish the story...
please write more I would like to know what happens next.
P.S I like what you have so far! Please continue
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