i thought it was pretty good. that is one of my fears is to be in danger like that and no one being around. it seemed kind of quick for the person to be rescued so fast. i didnt understand to much what was going on. well im new on here and have no idea how to start up a book. well i would like to read more to see how the story goes.
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