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Maybe on the next book. If you notice, I haven't included a lot of information yet because I'm still trying to figure out how my characters will be like. I'll try to keep in mind your suggestion on the next book. Thank you for the comment. :D

It was a really cool start! The only thing I really didn't like about it was you didn't really discribe what the characters looked like and the scenery. :( Please tell me when you write more.

~Cheyenne X)