Well done. This story flows well. It peaks curiosity to keep the reader reading. Good job.
ignominius & greeneyedangel:
thank youu! I'm glad you guys enjoyed it. Your words mean much more than you think :)
Ok that was one of the best books i have read, and I am being completley honest
A well written read. It was for me an interesting peek into a greatly different culture. One that would otherwise be difficult to fully understand especially a man.
wouldntyouliketoknow- Thank youu!! :)
It means so much!
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story writing contest "Travel Stories".
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