Memories define us, keeping our past in a safe part of our mind. And even as our life's journey takes a different path, there is that memory book grounding us to the 'before.' I thought your story was poignant and well told. Fiction can never measure up to the absolute truths that life throws at us: the small moments of joy, the large moments of grief! I will give you a vote. Wa do, Elizabeth.
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Well written with only a few errors but not enough to worry about. Great novel starter. Let me know when you write more. The book needs a cover to entice the reader. I gave you a star./joeparente. Please read "WHITE DOWN" and comment or/and "THE RECIPE". Both, are in contest.