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amberlee9

Your book Unseen emotions , its really good you should finish it , maybe get it pulished when ya , do .
any way one thing I gotta say is that when your charaters talk it confusing, so this is what I do.
("hey what up?" Jake said I looked at him he smilled at me I smile back .
and say.
"hey Jake whats up,")
see what I did ? its easier that way for the readers.
Write on just take my information. :)

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