For my first books, I start with some of my writer's excerises. I left the preamble; so that you may know the objective of the piece, but it is not required for anyone to read it. Rather to help anyone who is serious about contructive critique which I would enjoy reading immensely for future improvement of my abilities and skills. Thank you to all who read my work, and if there is a piece you wish me to read- feel free to... Show more
I'm a Fantasy/Hentai writer and i would love some constructive critizism. It's ok if you're not into that stuff and say no.
I'll be glad to help;i f you would like some crit. I'll read it, it'll just take some time; since I find I can't read much in One sitting anyway. Paragraphs @ a time might be my pace, depends how deep the descriptions and content.