I have to agree with kelly101. You style of writing is very well developed. With just some minor editing you can become a famous author. However, for now all I want is to read more chapters of your book. Is it meant to be finished? If it is, i have have to say it is not a good ending. Don't take me the wrong way I have always been asked for constructive criticism but I'm not really good at it but I have read quite a number of... Show more
I have to agree with kelly101. You style of writing is very well developed. With just some minor editing you can become a famous author. However, for now all I want is to read more chapters of your book. Is it meant to be finished? If it is, i have have to say it is not a good ending. Don't take me the wrong way I have always been asked for constructive criticism but I'm not really good at it but I have read quite a number of books. Even if you wanted to write a sequel you can't until you finish Sal and nick's adventure at the beach and their quest. You are doing really well, and i really hope you will continue with this book. You still need to make the title become true. I wish you good luck and am really looking forward to the rest after quite a while
I stopped posting because I didn't know if anyone was reading them. I only have about 3 more chapters of Flirting with Danger to write, so I plan to reread and check the other chapters and post every day until the whole book is posted. I've written 47 so far, there should be 50... Show more
I stopped posting because I didn't know if anyone was reading them. I only have about 3 more chapters of Flirting with Danger to write, so I plan to reread and check the other chapters and post every day until the whole book is posted. I've written 47 so far, there should be 50 in total. Then hopefully I can get back into writing for the other books.
thank you!
hi, please finish flirting with Danger. it has been left hanging for a long time.. and would like to see how you finishes off this book.tx