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If this is just a draft Tana, then I shudder to think what the edited work will look like. I notice though that you spell "were" as "where". Otherwise you have definitely inspired me to pursue the avenue of darkness myself. Maybe I could reach out to you for tips!
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The book I have uploaded is just a roughdraft so any advice on changes or who to make it better and longer are greatly apperciated. Thanks!!!!