I just read some of your story and I like you style, Can I give you one simple tip for future editing.
"The notes ranging from soaring highs, to piercing like screams, some low almost heart-breaking, lost within notes that were sweet and comforting.
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I was wanted to tell you that I just uploaded a new chapter to Awakening my new supernatural romance novel( Midnight Academy) here's the link plzz comment and star http://www.bookrix.com/book.php?bookID=halima612_1302908716.7211430073&page=22&preview=&MaxW=1249&MaxY=666&tm=1304561784&bmkPAGE=22&DoSelfFocus=1