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storyteller4

Hi Emily Rose

Since you are in age range of a story I have written entitled, Joshua's Visitor, I would really appreciate your opinion on this story. Does it hold your interest? Is it boring? Do you want to continue on. The whole story is there- 5 short chapters. Even if you only can get to one I would appreciate your opinion. thank you.

http://www.bookrix.com/_title-en-janice-abel-joshua-039-s-visitor

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adriana.poteete

Her hair was up in a ponytail
Her favorite dress tied with a b ow.
Today was Daddy's Day at school,
And she couldn't wait to go.

But her mommy tried to tell her,
That she probably should stay home.
Why the kids might not understand,
If she went to school alone.

But she was not afraid;
She knew just what to say.
What to tell her classmates
Of why he wasn't there today.

But still her mother worried,
For her to face this day alone.
And that... Show more

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wordwings

Thanks for the encouragement Emily =) You're astounding! I was seriously floored by the words you used for a summary/description!

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