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Hello...

I've started reading your book "College Love" and I'm going to be real honest with you, that book is amazing af! From the day I started reading it, I couldn't stop flipping the pages; I was soo in to it. I haven't finished with reading your book, but I'm halfway done and I can't wait to read the second part. I just want to congratulate you on writing such an amazing book and even one of the best on BookRix.

Since you have amazing writing skills, I was hoping If you can proofread and edit some of my works. I'm really willing to learn a lot from you. I wanted you to check out and proofread my Shorts Story, "Bad for Bad" and give me some feedback. Also , I would appreciate if you point out any mistakes and any thing that negative or positive about it.

Please Reply back. Thank you. :)

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Dear Teasha,

I honestly love both your books.You have a lot of charisma and talent for a fifteen year old girl.And i love that you love my books.Even though they are higly innapropriate.I would be happy to give you some crustructive critism, first thing 1st, always do not rush right to the point in your story.Keep the reader thinking of the next.And ive made that mistake multiple times.2nd, always check pununciation.Always make sure that periods and stuff go where they need to be.And dont forget the name of your charcters.A few book ive read on here, mixes the name of the charcters up. and it is higly confusing.3rd, do your best and make sure the book is intresting and if it is a series, end the book with a wonderous sentence or question.Thats all the advice i have for you now, but other than that, your all good for.

Again, thank you for reading my books.It also means alot to me.I also love your books -Blush- so keep it moving, and continue to pursue your dream or hobbie.Your doing fantastic.

Sincerly,

Traci, AKA, tracyluvv89

P.S- Dont ever question your skills or imagination because you are great at this.Have alot of hope in yourself because i know you can put your mind to anything based on what ive read.You are good and i spread my hope and acknowledgement within in you.Good Luck, Pumpkin. ^__^

You all should concider reading the books that I've spent so much time on. LOL. This is my first time writing a book in my whole entire life, so I really need some constructive criticism. thanks for reading, but HELPPP MEEE!!!!

Hi,

I would like to give you a look at my first eBook that has done the step from a german book, to the english version. It´s now available on amazon.com

The title is "The Curse - Touch of eternity"

http://www.amazon.com/The-Curse-Touch-eternity-ebook/dp/B007MM5QBM/ref=sr_1_5?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1332406492&sr=1-5

I would be happy, if you would have a look on the reading sample with the look inside.

A centuries old curse, a mysterious pendant and a young love reignite a vendetta that had died down long ago...

Samantha, an outsider, finds an old pendant within her deceased grandmother's belongings. A short while later, the seventeen-year old goes on a school-exchange to Scotland. No sooner has she arrived at her host family's than she is drawn into the country's tales and myths. When she then also meets the attractive Scot Payton, her world completely falls apart. The mysterious Highlander soon conquers Sams heart. Caught up in her feelings, she does not realize how much danger she is in - what she does not suspect: Payton's past holds a dark secret. A secret that has bound together both their families' fates for hundreds of years and which is now also endangering Sam's life...

*** The eBook contains two versions - one with scottish dialect and one without. ***

EXCERPT:

‘Do you do this often?’ I asked quietly.
‘What?’
‘This.’
‘Go fer a walk?’
‘No! You know what I mean! Hanging out with girls you have just met?’
Now I was grateful that it was almost dark, because the conversation wasn’t very comfortable and I was bound to be red in the face.
‘No, I never dae this kind o’ thing! And yersel’? Dae ye often go wi’ boys ye dinnae ken?’
I shook my head, embarrassed.
‘No, actually I am timid and sensible.’
Payton had stopped walking and looked at me.
‘Dae ye think it is sensible tae be here wi’ me?’
His words were quiet, almost whispered and his whole posture seemed very tense.
‘No. It is the most irrational thing I have ever done.’ I confessed.
I looked for his eyes, but he had turned his face away. To loosen the atmosphere I joked ‘But I don’t think that I am in danger. You don’t look as if you have killed that many people recently.’
His laugh was hard and forced ‘No, ye are right. No recently.’

Thanks a lot
Emily Bold

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